Today I worked on recutting the moment that we are introduced to Phillip. A lot of the class thought that the opening track-in shot was Phillip's POV, and that when Jim looks up, he was looking up at Phillip. I recut it accordingly, going straight from the moment when Jim looks up to a POV from Jim's perspective of Phillip standing over him and then kneeling down. It works well and I think this will eliminate the viewers' confusion.
I also worked on recutting the jump cut sequence of Jim eating breakfast. It still needs work, but I'm messing with it to get ideas on the best way to cut it. I also started working on the next scene and looking at all the footage again so I know what I'm working with for scene 4.
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